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| 人防工程結(jié)構(gòu)設(shè)計和普通民用建筑設(shè)計有所不同,人防荷載屬于偶然的瞬間作用,作用次數(shù)通常只有一次,荷載值卻特別大,但很不確定。因此設(shè)計的安全度或者承載力儲備可以降低要求,材料設(shè)計強(qiáng)度可提高,允許結(jié)構(gòu)在達(dá)到設(shè)計荷載時進(jìn)入塑性屈服狀態(tài),出現(xiàn)較大的變形和裂縫,甚至是局部破壞,但是必須防止倒塌和具備必要的維護(hù)功能。因此,人防工程對建筑材料的要求不但要高強(qiáng),而且要高延性、高耗能能力和抗沖擊性。 |

木蟲 (小有名氣)
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這樣子:) structure design of the civil air defence, which requires the ability of carrying the instantaneous, and usually one-off load with large but unstable value, is not very similar to the ordinary construction designing for civil use. As a matter of fact, the designing, when obtained appropriate collapse resistance and necessary maintenance function, can have a fairly slack property restrict like a lower level of safety and bearing capacity, a higher designing material strength, a plastic yielding condition under designing load, or some major deformation, crack, even local failure. So the civil air defence requires the building materials to be of high strength, ductility,energy dissipation as well as impact &shock resistance. |
金蟲 (正式寫手)
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我是這樣譯的,謝謝你的參與,金幣贈給你。 Design of civil air defence work is different to general civil. load are occasional moments of civil air defense role, the role of the number usually only once, load value is particularly large, but uncertain. Therefore the design of safety or capacity of reserve requirements can be reduced, material design strength can be increased, allowing structural design load is reached when the plastic strain state of a larger deformation and fracture, or even partial destruction, it must be to prevent collapse and has the necessary maintenance functions. Therefore, the civil air defense engineering requirements for building materials not only strength but also high ductility, high energy capacity and impact resistance. |

木蟲 (小有名氣)
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您好!我覺得您這樣翻不太好,如果您是要投外文期刊的話,我想依照中文的文法直接翻譯不太好,畢竟這樣子只有中國人讀得懂。不過如果您堅持自己的意見,也無可厚非。這里對您自己的翻譯在一些有問題的做了一些修改,僅供參考。 Design of civil air defence work is different to that of(不同于民用的設(shè)計而非民用建筑本身) general civil. load plays a role of occasional moment in the case of civil air defense and usually appears only once, with a particularly large but uncertain value.(扮演怎樣的角色不能說be a XXX role,另外load不是一個復(fù)數(shù),不可用are,而the role of number usually only once是完全不通的, load value is particularly large, but uncertain在語法上基本正確,但需要在前邊加上and the,不過一定要使用這種句式,會讓您的句子變得十分累贅。) Therefore the design of safety or capacity of reserve requirements can be reduced, the designed material strength(材料設(shè)計應(yīng)力不能翻譯為material design strength,可以是 the designed material strength或者the material designing strength) can be increased, allowing the designed structural load is reached when the plastic strain state of a larger deformation and fracture, or even partial destruction, it must be to prevent collapse and has the necessary maintenance functions(這一整句的問題實在太多,如果您覺得我不夠說服力,您可以詢問一下周圍的朋友,建議您這一句參考我給您的翻譯). Therefore, the civil air defense engineering requirements for building materials contains not only high strength but also high ductility, energy capacity and impact resistance. (這里使用not only...but also 其實是一個不好的選擇,如果您一定要用,根據(jù)句子的意思,需要在not only前邊加上contains等動詞,因為這是材料對性能的需求所包括的內(nèi)容,而在but also后邊只有第一個加上high就足夠了。此外不是說只要是因此,就一定要翻譯成therefore,這樣會令讀者感到不舒服。) |
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