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05年10月中科院A卷作文： what does work mean to you? it is a just a means to make ends meet, to cover life enpenses? 我的作文： 用時(shí)近一個(gè)小時(shí)，因?yàn)槭菑?fù)習(xí)考博以來(lái)的第一篇作文 所以很艱難！ 完事開(kāi)頭難！ what does work mean to you？ Two main kings of answers have been offered. One is couched in terms of realism. they argue that it is just a means to make ends meet, to cover life enpenses. The other, in my view correct, type fo answer is that it is a way to realize one's dream and the source of happiness. To me, a college teacher, I teach students knoeledge and gain happiness from them. 第一段，要去接孩子了，后續(xù)會(huì)上第二段，第三段。 PS 一大把年紀(jì)了還要考博，悲催�。。�！ |
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