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5句英語(yǔ),兩個(gè)標(biāo)點(diǎn),2個(gè)小問(wèn)題求指導(dǎo)語(yǔ)法
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1. The apparatus used for non-contact measurement, which simultaneously measures elongation and torsion angle of the specimen uses two independently operating laser sensors. 這句話是否有不能不改的語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題?我讀了感覺(jué)(1)少了一些定冠詞(2)elongation and torsion angle應(yīng)該用elongational and torsional angle 2. The study was carried out until the failure of each of the specimens. 這句話是否有不能不改的語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題?句子的意思應(yīng)該是試驗(yàn)一直進(jìn)行到每個(gè)試件失效。我覺(jué)得 carried out until連在一起用感覺(jué)有歧義 3. the corrections in the velocities of kinematic forcing and displacement were introduces in order to meet in each load case the established time criterion. in each load case 和the established time criterion的順序是否一定要對(duì)調(diào) 4. It should be noted how the shape of the notch influences the F-u graph. 這句話寫(xiě)在英語(yǔ)論文中是否合適?是否有點(diǎn)口語(yǔ)化? 5. an example method能這么說(shuō)嗎?是不是必須是an exemplificative method 6. The increase of the notch radius, increases the critical torsional angle.里的逗號(hào)是否一定要去掉 In order to carry out nonlinear numerical calculations using the finite element method it was necessary to know the values of material parameters. 句子,it was前是否一定要加逗號(hào) 7. It is mean that +從句對(duì)嗎?是否一定要是It means that 8. 英文論文是不是不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)we開(kāi)頭的主動(dòng)式?而應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)? |
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1. The apparatus used for non-contact measurement, which simultaneously measures elongation and torsion angle of the specimen uses two independently operating laser sensors. Looks perfectly fine to me. elongation and torsion angle也是可以的。 2. The study was carried out until the failure of each of the specimens. Looks perfectly normal to me again. You can use to instead of until if you like. 3. the corrections in the velocities of kinematic forcing and displacement were introduces in order to meet in each load case the established time criterion. "in each load case 和the established time criterion的順序是否一定要對(duì)調(diào)". 對(duì)調(diào)后更清楚,不對(duì)調(diào)也未嘗不可。在我看來(lái),更重要的問(wèn)題應(yīng)該是were introduced (而非introduces) 4. It should be noted how the shape of the notch influences the F-u graph. Not a problem at all. 5. an example method能這么說(shuō)嗎?是不是必須是an exemplificative method ”an example method“是成立的,只是不知道上下文想具體說(shuō)什么。 6. The increase of the notch radius, increases the critical torsional angle.里的逗號(hào)是否一定要去掉: 當(dāng)然要去掉! In order to carry out nonlinear numerical calculations using the finite element method it was necessary to know the values of material parameters. 句子,it was前是否一定要加逗號(hào):不一定,都可以,憑你喜歡與習(xí)慣。 7. It is mean that +從句對(duì)嗎?是否一定要是It means that ”It is mean that“ 沒(méi)有這種說(shuō)法,你可以說(shuō)It is meant that 8. 英文論文是不是不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)we開(kāi)頭的主動(dòng)式?而應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)? No such thing。 But personally, I never start a sentence by "we...". 不是絕對(duì),但一般少用。 |
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我不懂語(yǔ)法(是真的),我只能提供幾個(gè)例子: In order to succeed, we must first believe that we can. (加了逗號(hào)) In order to be irreplaceable one must always be different.(未加逗號(hào)) 這種例子鋪天蓋地?磥(lái)不懂語(yǔ)法的人還很多(稍得安慰) 可能不懂語(yǔ)法的緣故,我只會(huì)用it is meant that, or it means that。無(wú)法接受it is mean that的用法。 |
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