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請(qǐng)問這句正確嗎?For 2D MoS2 applied in sensor fields, though they are still far from being explored as extensively as done for graphene.... 我想表達(dá)的意思是,對(duì)于二維硫化鉬用于傳感領(lǐng)域,盡管它遠(yuǎn)沒有石墨烯調(diào)查的廣泛。。。特別是后面那一部分 |
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木蟲之王 (文學(xué)泰斗)
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food taste GOOD = 好吃 ( GOOD = 形容詞 = 形容名詞 taste ) job WELL done = 做得好 ( WELL = 副詞 = 形容動(dòng)詞 do ) 廣泛的調(diào)查 = well researched, well explored ... 二維硫化鉬用于傳感領(lǐng)域,盡管它遠(yuǎn)沒有石墨烯調(diào)查的廣泛。。 2-D MoS2 sensors, though not as hot a research topic as graphene sensors, ... ( 注意 2-D 引號(hào), research topic 單數(shù) ) ( ... hot research topic ... = 會(huì)意禮貌用語 ) 對(duì)于... = for // 至于 = as for // 關(guān)于 = regarding 用哪一個(gè)得看你的原意 如果原意是 "即使... 迄今未受重視, 筆者仍謹(jǐn)慎待之..." 則可考慮寫 2-D MoS2 sensors ( ...實(shí)例1, 實(shí)例2 ... ), a leading-edge technology often mentioned only briefly [after graphenes] in literature, are given more comprehensive coverage 短短幾字讓讀者想讀, 學(xué)報(bào)編輯想受, 勝過 As for... 或 Although... 冗長(zhǎng)子句 切記不要寫 "本文..." = "this article" 甚至于 "here" |
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我的看法是: 1、把“though”替換成"although",盡管兩者意思相同,但"although"更正式,更書面化一點(diǎn)。 2、最后“ are still far from being explored as extensively as done for graphene....”,個(gè)人認(rèn)為可改為“are not as well researched as graphene....” 整句話這么說“For 2D MoS2 applied in sensor fields, although they are not as well researched as graphene....”,是不是更好點(diǎn)? |
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