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It can be seen in Fig. 3 that as the temperature decreases below 10 K, the mobilities for Ns = 1.4*10^11 cm^-2 and Ns = 6.8*10^10 cm^-2 increase faster than that under the μ~T^-1 law. 要表達(dá)的意思是“從圖三可以看出當(dāng)溫度降低到10K以下, Ns = 1.4*10^11 cm^-2和Ns = 6.8*10^10 cm^-2所對(duì)應(yīng)的遷移率增長(zhǎng)的比μ~T^-1關(guān)系更快”(μ,T分別是遷移率和溫度的符號(hào)) 請(qǐng)教這句英語(yǔ)表達(dá)清楚了嗎,主要是后半句。我認(rèn)為意思很明確啊,但審稿人要求明確我要表達(dá)的意思,我不知道該咋說(shuō)了。謝謝 |
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謝謝回答。 mobilities for Ns=1.4×10^11 cm-2 and Ns=6.8×10^10 cm-2 沒(méi)有問(wèn)題,算是習(xí)慣用法,可能我中文沒(méi)表達(dá)好 結(jié)合您的建議,這樣表達(dá)是否有問(wèn)題(結(jié)構(gòu)上和單復(fù)數(shù)): It can be seen in Fig. 3 that as the temperature decreases and is below 10 K, the mobilities for Ns = 1.4*10^11 cm^-2 and Ns = 6.8*10^10 cm^-2 increase at a faster rate than that under the μ~T^-1 law. 我還是希望用the mobilities 作主語(yǔ),因?yàn)楹竺孢有半句話,為了問(wèn)題簡(jiǎn)單沒(méi)有寫(xiě)出來(lái)。 |
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原話好像太中國(guó)風(fēng)了,這樣是否更好些呢 It can be seen in Fig. 3 that as the temperature decreases, the growth rates of mobilities for Ns=1.4×10^11 cm-2 and Ns=6.8×10^10 cm-2 below 10 K are faster than that described by the μ~T^-1 law above 10 K. "從圖3可以看出,隨著溫度降低,Ns=1.4×1011 cm-2 and Ns=6.8×1010 cm-2在10K下的增長(zhǎng)速度比10K以上用μ~T-1來(lái)描述的增長(zhǎng)速度更快" 感覺(jué)還是很繞 |
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覺(jué)得原譯文沒(méi)有譯出“對(duì)應(yīng)的”,試試看: It can be seen in Fig. 3 that as the temperature decreases and is below 10 K, the increase in mobility, when Ns = 1.4*10^11 cm^-2 and Ns = 6.8*10^10 cm^-2, is faster than that under the μ~T^-1 law. 前半句中說(shuō)溫度,如果僅僅是想強(qiáng)調(diào)當(dāng)溫度低于10K, 用。。。temperature is below 即可;否則如果必須強(qiáng)調(diào)是減小到10K以下,就建議用上面的as the temperature decreases and is below 10 K,樓主可以選擇下。 后半句先用when ...說(shuō)明Ns。。的條件,然后用faster than that (that 指mobility,為了不重復(fù))。如果仍覺(jué)得不清楚,還可以考慮用 faster than the corresponding one under the μ~T^-1 law, 當(dāng)然句子又長(zhǎng)了些。 供參考 |

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